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Wither thou goest
There goest I.
O'er sun, field
'Neath river, sky.
Taketh me to that land
Of the wishes, dreams
Hither to ruby rainbows
Thither to salient seams
Out yonder we'll romp
Through meadows true
Past mountains black
And rabbit burrows blue
I care not for the world
Not I for its banks!
Away with its wars
Its guns and tanks.
If stars be blessings
To each one we'll fly
For wither thou goest....

There goest I.
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Reading Othello in English at the moment. Thought i'd try my hand at some old language stuff. ;)
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~Cwolloty Sep 28, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
gave me goosebumps when i read it :)
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~StarkRaving-Mad Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks luv :D
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*Zenith-Nadir69 Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AMG It's beautiful baby sis!!! You must write more. Old English can be your thing hey?! I think so :happybounce:!
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~shehrozeameen Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The beauty of this poem lies in its balance - its vintage, its immoral, and yet... its so genuine; the first, because it DOES have a certain allure of the Victorian/Edwardian sensibilities to it; its immoral, because you can feel a certain edge towards the person's refusal to leave.

Such as in the opening:

Wither thou goest
There goest I.
O'er sun, field
'Neath river, sky.


it takes on a more awe-inspiring meaning because by the end, it recedes to:

To each one we'll fly
For wither thou goest....

There goest I.


Which is a genuine emotion.

On a second note, though, this reminds me of Hardy's subtlety, with a curious rigor that was commonplace in Ireland... Thomas Moore, to an extent, though Jonathan Swift would be a closer approximation.

:shrug: that's what I feel. :)
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~midnightrayne91 Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing it! it's well written with so much meaning.
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i love old school poety. nicely done.
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~StarkRaving-Mad Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much :)
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